Precision Clean

Precision Clean I need somebody who is good at writing and help me proofread the folloing paragraph...thanks? This innovative double-lever brass tub faucet is the next level of design today. Why ...

Precision Clean

I need somebody who is good at writing and help me proofread the folloing paragraph...thanks?

This innovative double-lever brass tub faucet is the next level of design today. Why stop at just a set of taps for your bathroom? Our bath shower combinations not only make your bath more versatile, but a shower attachment is always a plus when it comes to cleaning the bath. It features a truly minimalist approach to bathroom style: an eye-catching simplicity and signature style of luxury color that proves beyond doubt that less really can mean more. Why not incorporate our unique design, available here, into your bathroom today! This wall-mounted faucet set anticipated with strong sense of design features precision control with exclusive luxury ceramic lever and drip-free operation, and also pioneers a clean design in the bathroom with simplicity as the main focus. Made from solid brass with a gleaming chrome finish, the smooth quarter turn action displays precision and total quality. The chrome face plate gives a clean modern look and feel to the bathroom.

Your paragraph has very strong features -- but I have the following suggestions.

Your paragraph: "This wall-mounted faucet set anticipated with strong sense of design features precision control with exclusive luxury ceramic lever and drip-free operation, and also pioneers a clean design in the bathroom with simplicity as the main focus."
**Problem: A faucet set cannot "anticipate design" -- to anticipate is something only humans (or animals) are capable of. Additionally, the sentence is too long. I would rewrite the sentence using parallel features of the faucet to support one another.

Your paragraph: "Made from solid brass with a gleaming chrome finish, the smooth quarter turn action displays precision and total quality."
**Problem: I guess I am faucet challenged but when I think of brass I think of a brass colored fixture and when I think of chrome I think of shiny silver. This leaves me confused as a reader. I also think I'd say: ". . . chrome finish, with a smooth quarter turn action allowing for precision water flow." -- just because I am also not sure I understand how a faucet "displays" precision and quality.

I hope this helps.